Wednesday, March 18, 2009

A Story made by all

Well, this morning i had a quick thought. "I like to write stories and so do others, so maybe i should put all those creative juices together and make something awesome?" So that is what i'm attmpeting to do in this post with comments afterward, i'd say constructive criticism is welcome, and lets try to make an awesome continuing masterpiece. I'll start this off with a descriptive beginning introduction, then we can head from there.
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The city awoke to the morning sun, as usual the laborers wake and begin to make their first meal, whether it be merely of coffee and a muffin or a full-fledged bacon and egg breakfast. All of them merely puttering around, living in a society crafted for them, with no inkling to the outside world. They are a happy and content people. To survive in this world of shiny happy people, one must blend into their surroundings.

Dressed prim and proper, i walk down the sunlit drive, with coffee in hand and a smile on my face. The SUV in the driveway gleams in the morning sun. 
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3 comments:

  1. David NTLBMarch 18, 2009 at 3:15 PM

    I believe it is spelled 'linking' and not 'inkling' but anyway nice start.

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  2. KastorMarch 18, 2009 at 10:45 PM

    Oh damn your right, i did write this earlier today...in the community room (not the best environment). But thanks.

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  3. David NTLBMarch 19, 2009 at 12:26 AM

    I see....9:11 am is not a good time to be doing anything constructive. And you still haven't fixed the word.

    And lemme guess.....This story of yours, it's set in some weirdo communist society where all the people are autonomous and all they do is work?

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